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A poem I wrote=SHOULD I PUBLISH IT???
Replies: 8 — Last Post Nov. 23, 2008 3:14am by saradotcom
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( kakashisensei )


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All the feelings just spilled out of my heart and became these beautiful words. Im thinking of getting it published but i dont know if i should submit it to rolling stone or New Yorker

Anyways its called EPIC VAMPIRE SLAUGHTER

Upon my neck I had a dream that one day I would join their ranks
Upon this dream that in my head  after they bit I would say thanks
And if upon I happenstance to a blooded victim find
I will gouge up into her, devour her body, soul and mind
Avoiding village mobs and slayers, living in coffins and tombs
night would be the time to play before returning to my earthly womb
alas sweet vampyre, bite this neck so I can join your epic fold
I find these days and harrowed nights
that I am always alone and cold

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blufindr


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No.

Try again, vampire wannabe.

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That I was put here
For you

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negative0

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i think you should quit poetry.
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Isobel


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Just send it to the Nobel awards judges.

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( kakashisensei )


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You guys dont know anything about poetry Epic Vampire Slaughter is up there with O Captain my Captain in terms of beauty and cleverness and poeticism. You need to learn what you're talking about. So which literary journal fits this piece best?
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Dragonfang93


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And you said that poetry wasn't MY thing!

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( kakashisensei )


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Quote: from Dragonfang93 at 2:43 am on Nov. 23, 2008
And you said that poetry wasn't MY thing!

you guys are dumb if you havent realized this is making fun of all those LW emos who try to write poems and the poems always suck. I came up with this shit in 30 seconds and tried to make it as emo as possible, of course it sucks!

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Dragonfang93


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Quote: from kakashisensei at 9:15 pm on Nov. 23, 2008
Quote: from Dragonfang93 at 2:43 am on Nov. 23, 2008
And you said that poetry wasn't MY thing!

you guys are dumb if you havent realized this is making fun of all those LW emos who try to write poems and the poems always suck. I came up with this shit in 30 seconds and tried to make it as emo as possible, of course it sucks!

At least my poem had a special meaning behind it.

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Inspired Gemmologist.

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saradotcom


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I THINK IT IS THE MOST EPIC POEM OF ALL.  Blow it up, frame it, put it on my wall.  Better yet, 10 feet tall, nailed to the outside of my house.  Yes.

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